Agent Replies--Night and Day
Friday I received a letter from Ethan Ellenberg regarding my YA partial he requested.
Dear Ms. Thomason,
Thank you for sending your YA novel GOOD FRIENDS GONE BAD. I think it is a facinating idea (YAY!). I've never seen anything like it (DOUBLE YAY!). Unfortunately I just didn't love the writing(OUCH!). Best of luck with other agents.
I wasn't upset after reading this, but instead thought this was kind of funny. Just last week I received a letter from another agent who had read the partial, and she said she loved the writing and the sassy voice, but not so much the idea of it.
Agents are so completely opposite. I'm really learning a lot about this. I can't change the way I write, so no need to stress over that. If an agent doesn't like my writing, then that's not the agent for me. I was ready to make changes to the ms based on what another agent said, about not liking the actual set up of the story, but if I listen to this last rejeciton, this agent says the idea is fascinating.
So I'm thinking I just need to wait this out and see if there is just one agent out there who likes the idea and the writing. If not, I guess I can make changes based on the overall suggestions.

Dear Ms. Thomason,
Thank you for sending your YA novel GOOD FRIENDS GONE BAD. I think it is a facinating idea (YAY!). I've never seen anything like it (DOUBLE YAY!). Unfortunately I just didn't love the writing(OUCH!). Best of luck with other agents.
I wasn't upset after reading this, but instead thought this was kind of funny. Just last week I received a letter from another agent who had read the partial, and she said she loved the writing and the sassy voice, but not so much the idea of it.
Agents are so completely opposite. I'm really learning a lot about this. I can't change the way I write, so no need to stress over that. If an agent doesn't like my writing, then that's not the agent for me. I was ready to make changes to the ms based on what another agent said, about not liking the actual set up of the story, but if I listen to this last rejeciton, this agent says the idea is fascinating.
So I'm thinking I just need to wait this out and see if there is just one agent out there who likes the idea and the writing. If not, I guess I can make changes based on the overall suggestions.

I think you've got a great attitude!
(I'm curious who the agent was. Something about his last line sounds familiar . . .)